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作者:小建 阅读:620次评论:1条

时间:2018/1/12 19:11:42星级:★★★

【编者按】画面感十足,用词精巧,耐人寻味,形象类比鲜明。一幅老人垂钓图,近在眼前,形象传神。

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皎月苍穹 评论 / 2018/1/14 18:14:39
很小巧的一首,问候作者。

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